You are a big mean
You made me very little
Why did you do that?
– live haiku (impressive and improvised) spoken by The Devon to me, April 2000
Vous etes un gros mechant
Vous m’avais fait(e) si petit(e)
Pourquoi avez-vous fait ca?
Tu es un gros mechant
Tu m’as fait(e) si petit(e)
Pourquoi as-tu fait ca?
– translated by The Amalia, Feburary 2005
by the way you can clicky on the image up there for a bigger one. i shot this yesterday whilst lost on a walk at lunch time on a washed-out trail that goes up the capilano river.
emotional haiku
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7 responses to “emotional haiku”
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soft are stars
always around
constant reminder -
3-3-5?
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ps: i like it!
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I do too. It has a nice ring to it..grood flow.
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the pipe has no bowl
and stands akimbo
poor thing
two ducks
one not as tall
this is very odd
whut -
That’s a strange way to use the word akimbo. Akimbo requires arms.
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Haiku is the best
Easy and Quick, I can do
It’s Prose for Dummies
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