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  • February 9, 2005

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You are a big mean
You made me very little
Why did you do that?

- live haiku (impressive and improvised) spoken by The Devon to me, April 2000

Vous etes un gros mechant
Vous m’avais fait(e) si petit(e)
Pourquoi avez-vous fait ca?

Tu es un gros mechant
Tu m’as fait(e) si petit(e)
Pourquoi as-tu fait ca?

- translated by The Amalia, Feburary 2005

by the way you can clicky on the image up there for a bigger one. i shot this yesterday whilst lost on a walk at lunch time on a washed-out trail that goes up the capilano river.

Posted by davin on February 9, 2005 4:47 PM | Permalink

Comments

GRAVATAR

soft are stars
always around
constant reminder

Posted by neil | February 10, 2005 11:49 AM
GRAVATAR

3-3-5?

Posted by davin | February 10, 2005 11:59 AM
GRAVATAR

ps: i like it!

Posted by davin | February 10, 2005 11:59 AM
GRAVATAR

I do too. It has a nice ring to it..grood flow.

Posted by Jaime | February 10, 2005 1:20 PM
GRAVATAR

the pipe has no bowl
and stands akimbo
poor thing


two ducks
one not as tall
this is very odd
whut

Posted by Denis | February 10, 2005 2:09 PM
GRAVATAR

That's a strange way to use the word akimbo. Akimbo requires arms.

Posted by Devon | February 10, 2005 8:02 PM
GRAVATAR

Haiku is the best
Easy and Quick, I can do
It's Prose for Dummies

Posted by Steve | February 10, 2005 9:29 PM

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